The diagram below shows the various stages required to produce coffee products from coffee beans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the various stages required to produce coffee products from coffee beans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the various stages required to produce coffee products from coffee beans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram defines the various stages required to produce
coffee
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products with the help of
coffee
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beans
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.
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,
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process consists
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total of 8 steps
produce
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coffee
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products. It starts with harvesting
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the
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apply
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coffee
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beans
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and ends
at
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purchasing
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coffee
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products. The process begins with
harvesting
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the harvesting
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of
coffee
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beans
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from the plants which is carried out only once per year. Once harvested, the
coffee
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beans
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are sent for processing where they are gathered. The next stage involves drying
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the seeds in the sun for 24 to 72 hours, after which the
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are sent for hulling where the outer skin of the
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beans
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and removed. In step 5, the
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beans
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roasted for 10 to 20 minutes. Once the
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beans
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are done roasting, they are packed into paper or plastic bags
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and
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sent for delivery. At the final
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the
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beans
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are
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delivered to restaurants, cafes, and retail stores for sale.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, beans with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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