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The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selectingand reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selectingand reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two pie charts illustrate the marital status of the populations of
Canada
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 and
Australia
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, measured as percentages.
Overall
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, the majority of
individuals
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 in both countries fall under the "Separated" and "Married" categories,
while
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 the proportion of divorced
individuals
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 is the lowest.
Additionally
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,
Canada
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 has a small percentage of same-sex marriages,
whereas
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this
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 category is negligible in
Australia
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. In
Canada
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, 53% of people are separated, which is significantly higher than the 41% recorded in
Australia
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.
Similarly
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, the percentage of married
individuals
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 is greater in
Australia
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 (46%) compared to
Canada
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 (29%), making it one of the most notable differences between the two nations.
Furthermore
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, the percentage of widowed and single
individuals
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 is almost identical in both countries, at around 7% and 5%, respectively. Meanwhile, the proportion of divorced
individuals
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 is slightly higher in
Australia
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 (2%) than in
Canada
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 (1%). One unique feature of the data is that same-sex marriages account for 3% of
Canada
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’s population,
whereas
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this
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 category is virtually non-existent in
Australia
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. Despite minor variations, the
overall
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 marital status distribution in both countries follows a similar trend.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall, whereas".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words canada, australia, individuals with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • pie chart
  • marital status
  • population
  • comparison
  • percentage
  • proportion
  • notable
  • widowed
  • divorced
  • single
  • married
  • category
  • segment
  • distribution
  • highlight
  • similarities
  • differences
  • data
  • represent
  • summarize
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