A friend told you recently that he/she had gone to an excellent restaurant. You wonder if this restaurant will be suitable for your birthday party next week. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter tell your friend about your planned party ask what the restaurant is called and for directions to get there ask what kind of food it serves and if your friend has any particular recommendations from the menu

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Dear Sam, I hope you are doing well. I am writing to get some information about the restaurant that you have recently visited to host a party for your family.

Firstly

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, as you know, I'm thinking

to organize

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of organizing

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get to together

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get-together

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for my loved ones on the occasion of my birthday. I saw some of your pictures posted online. I observed that

eatery

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the eatery

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place has an attractive background and soothing ambience. So, I would like to book a table there for a dinner party next week.

Secondly

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, It

will

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would

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be great, if you

can

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give me some details of that restaurant,

inculding

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including

its exact address and name. So

that

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apply

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, I

check

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checked

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that place online to get some more information about their chargers for conducting an event and

services

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the services

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, they provide to their customers.

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Finally

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last

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, please

sugget

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suggest

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to me

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some of the dishes for

main

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the main

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course especially which you think are really delicious or

there

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if there

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is any other particular thing that you really enjoyed. I would love to include that

while

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making a reservation there. Let me know your

advise

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about that phenomenal restaurant, waiting for your response eagerly. Warm wishes, Mehak

mehakpreet1618Fri Feb 28 2025

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coherence and cohesion

Ensure clarity in your progression of ideas by structuring your paragraphs more distinctly, focusing on one main idea per paragraph.

coherence and cohesion

Provide clearer transitions between your sentences and ideas to enhance overall readability.

task achievement

Double-check for spelling errors, such as 'sugget' instead of 'suggest' and 'chargers' instead of 'charges'. Such inaccuracies can affect the impression of your writing.

task achievement

While the tone is generally warm, use a more direct approach when asking for information to strengthen your tone further.

suitable writing tone

The letter maintains a friendly and warm tone throughout, which is suitable for a letter to a friend.

complete response

You’ve included all the necessary points in your letter, such as your party plans and specific questions about the restaurant.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

192 words

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