The charts below give information about the purposes of travel for passengers using four different UK airports in 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below give information about the purposes of travel for passengers using four different UK airports in 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie chart represents the reasons

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travellers departing and arriving in four UK airports in 2016. In general, it can be clearly seen that the passengers choosing to travel by plane took up the majority

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other was the lowest. As for Gatwick

Airport

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and Stansted

Airport

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, Gatwick welcomed more than

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half of passengers for holiday, at 54%

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the figure for visiting friends and family accounted for a third. Stansted was opposite side. In specific, the

firgure

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figures

for visiting relatives and business were 48% and 30% respectively.

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that, Business and Other made up a small number at both airports, 14% and 2%

correspondingly

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Regrading

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Heathrow and Luton

Airport

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, they had the same pattern. A large share of passengers

came

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these

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this airport

these airports

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airport

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to visit friends and family, 37% for Heathrow and 50% for Luton. Holiday was followed by over a third. The figure for Heathrow took up 26

percent

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at business and 4

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at other which doubled to Luton at

mentined

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mentioned

categories.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words airport with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

166 words

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The charts below give information about the purposes of travel for passengers using four different UK airports in 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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