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The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the
number
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 of families in
the
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America by their annual wages in 2007,2011 and 2015.
Overall
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, the
housholds
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households
 with $100,000 or more incomes had the highest
number
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 in 2007 and 2015, and the largest
number
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 of households in 2011 were those with $25,000- $49,999 incomes.
While
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 the families with wages
$
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of $
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75,000- $99,999 were the fewest
among
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in
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 all years. The
number
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 of households with less than $25,000 was similar
with
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to
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 the incomes of $25,000-49,999, which was 25
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millions
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million
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 and 27
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millions
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million
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, respectively. The numbers
incresed
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increased
increase
 slightly to nearly 25
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millions
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million
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 and
30millions
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30 million
 in 2011,
seperately
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separately
. The families with
seperately
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separately
 50,000-
seperately
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separately
 74,999 remained almost the same of 21
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millions
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million
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 every
years
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year
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, which was almost half of the people with income $10,000 or more.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, millions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • household distribution
  • income brackets
  • annual income
  • percentage change
  • trend analysis
  • income group
  • significant increase/decrease
  • steady growth/decline
  • fluctuations
  • compared to
  • in contrast
  • notably
  • median income
  • poverty line
  • economic factors
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