The line graph shows the percentage of New Zealand population from 1950 to 2050. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line diagram represents the proportion of

population

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the population

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in New Zealand between 1950 and 2050. In the big picture, it is conspicuous that both ages from 0 to 14 and 39 to 45 increased slowly in the observed

years

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.

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, the rest of the categories experienced a

down trend

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downtrend

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. Turning to individuals aged 0-37, the youngsters had

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upward slope trend, starting in 1950 at just

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5%,

then

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declined

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fractionally 30

years

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after before growing steadily and reaching a peak at 20% in 2050.

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, the citizens

aging

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25-37

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old experienced a slight rise in the first period,

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,

this

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dropped significantly by 20% in 10 decades Moving to 30

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above, there was a dramatic increase in the initial 50

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at the group of 38-45

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,

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,

this

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number remained constant

around

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40%

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the end of the periods.

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, the elderly commenced at just above 50% and continued to reach 10% more in 1990,

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the statistics reported that

this

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data declined by 10% and touched the lowest point (50%)