You recently booked a part-time course at a college. You now need to cancel your booking. Write a letter to the college administrator. In your letter: •Which part-time course you booked, •Explain why you need to cancel your booking, •Ask about booking a different course. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam, You get 20 minutes to complete this task.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

you

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to cancel one of the courses which I booked recently.

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week when my schedule was quite clear I checked your website and registered

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for

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your Data Analysis course which is held on

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evening. Please consider that

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I am eager to attend the mentioned course, regrettably, I will not be able to attend it anymore. The reason is supposed to be a business mission which I was assigned yesterday and is considered to be around three months.

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, my desire

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data analysis subjects still is keen and it would be appreciated if you

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merely inform me regarding your upcoming plans with

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the same

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subjects but different

timetales

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timetables

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six months.

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will help me to choose the right time quite fit to my updated plan. I

appologize

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apologise

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inconvenience and look forward to your prompt reply soon. Yours sincerely Abraham Streeter

majid.ebadiMon Mar 03 2025

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coherence and cohesion

Make sure to clearly separate your ideas into distinct paragraphs to improve clarity. Each paragraph should focus on a single idea.

task response

Consider rephrasing sentences for better clarity and flow. For instance, 'I am writing you to cancel' could be 'I am writing to cancel...'.

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Correct the misspelling of 'apologize' for a more polished appearance.

suitable writing tone

The letter maintains a polite and respectful tone throughout, which is appropriate for a formal correspondence.

complete response

You clearly state your intention to cancel the course and provide a legitimate reason, which is good for task achievement.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

158 words

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