You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centers in your country all look very similar to each other you don't fully agree with this opinion. write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter - say which points in the article you agree with - explain ways in which your town center is different from most other town centers - Offered to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am Sakshi Kansara and I am writing

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letter with regards to the article posted on front paper of newspaper about town

centers

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looking similar.

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, I agree that because of

population

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the population

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all the towns are in similar condition but

ever

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every

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town has its own beauty. If I take my

city

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into consideration, Toronto is the most iconic place

for

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visting

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visit

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, Toronto has the best skyline and a

worldwise

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famous 'CN Tower', for which most

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apply

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the

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people travel from different countries.

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, it has a museum called CNE which depicts the history of

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city

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the city

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and how it developed.

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, it is a great place to spend time with family and friends. Not only the big structures but

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city

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the city

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also

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consists of

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apply

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beautiful parks and nature, which one can enjoy.

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, I would like to make an offer

for being

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the tour guide so I can show my

city

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to people

from

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with

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my eyes. Please reach out to me via email

[email protected]

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at [email protected]

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. Hoping to hear from you soon. Yours sincerely, Sakshi

kshakshi16Tue Mar 04 2025

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coherence and cohesion

Consider rephrasing the opening sentence for clarity. For instance, instead of 'with regards to the article posted on front paper of newspaper', you could say 'regarding the article published on the front page of the newspaper'.

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In your second paragraph, clarify a bit more about the differences between your town center and others by adding specific examples. You mentioned the CN Tower and the museum, but some more details about why these make your town center unique would strengthen your argument.

coherence and cohesion

Conclude your letter with a more formal closing remark, such as, 'Thank you for considering my offer. I look forward to your response.' This adds a touch of professionalism.

task achievement

Your enthusiasm to share your city with others is evident and adds a personal touch to the letter.

coherence and cohesion

You have maintained a polite and respectful tone throughout your letter, which is essential in formal writing.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

179 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

I am writing in response to
the article published in your newspaper
I would like to express my disagreement with
the claim made in the article that
I agree with some points raised in the article
However, I believe that there are significant differences in my town center
One notable difference is
Another way in which my town center stands out is
Furthermore,
In addition to
I would be more than happy to offer
a guided tour of my town
to the writer of the article

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