line line graphs global population figures

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the global population number, at billions, from 1960 and the prediction until 2080.

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, started at 3 million people

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1960, the number rose gradually and

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constantly increase until

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a peak at 10

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in 2080.

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, the global population figures climbed continuously

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1960 and projected until 2080.

stefaniedj11

Mar 5, 2025

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