line line graphs global population figures

line line graphs global population figures
IELTS Writing Task Chart for line line graphs global population figures
The line graphs
illustrates
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illustrate
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the global population number, at billions, from 1960 and the prediction until 2080.
To begin
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, started at 3 million people
at
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in
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1960, the number rose gradually and
predicted
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is predicted
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constantly increase until
reach
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reaches
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a peak at 10
millions
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million
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in 2080.
Overall
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, the global population figures climbed continuously
started
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starting
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at
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in
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1960 and projected until 2080.

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