line graphs global population figures

line graphs global population figures
IELTS Writing Task Chart for line graphs global population figures
The graph shows approximately global population figures around the world from 1960 to forecast in 2080.
In every
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Every
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year, the global population is expected to increase. in 1960 there were around 2.5
billion
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people and
this
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rose
around
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to around
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6
billion
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forty years later. The rate of increase stays the same until 2020 at just under 8
billion
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but
then
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it slows down. By 2080 the global population is predicted to have
increase
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increased
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nearly
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by nearly
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11
billion
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.

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Linking words: Add some linking words.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words billion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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