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The pie charts below show unitsof electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show unitsof electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The four pie charts display the units of
electricity
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 produced by different energy sources in
Australia
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 and
France
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 in 1980 and 2000.
Overall
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,
while
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initially
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,
Australia
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 produced more
electricity
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 in comparison to
France
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, by the year 2000,
France
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 doubled its
electricity
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 production, exceeding the 170 units produced by
Australia
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 in that same year. Another interesting feature is that the amount of
electricity
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 that comes from Nuclear
power
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 in
France
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 increased by 4 times, becoming the main source of
electricity
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 in 2000.
Whereas
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, no
electricity
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 was made using nuclear
power
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 in
Australia
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. Looking at the details, the main
power
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 source for
electricity
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 in
Australia
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 in both years was coal, producing 50% of the
electricity
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 in 1980, increasing it to slightly over 3 quarters by 2000. Meanwhile,
France
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 reduced its use of coal from 28% to 13 per cent.
Hydro
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Hydropower
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power
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 and natural gasses each were being used for the generation of one-fifth of
Australia
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's
electricity
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 in 1980. That figure reduced to only 2 units each by 2000. Meanwhile, these two sources were utilised for generating one-third of
France
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's electrical currents in 1980, combined.
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, by 2000, only 2.2 per cent of
electricity
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 came from hydro and natural gas.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, australia, france, power with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • pie charts
  • electricity production
  • fuel source
  • percentage
  • units of electricity
  • coal
  • natural gas
  • nuclear power
  • hydropower
  • oil
  • renewable energy
  • trend
  • significant increase/decrease
  • remain constant
  • proportion
  • notable shift
  • comparatively
  • account for
  • dominant source
  • aggregate change
  • fluctuate
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