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The graph below shows the population of India and China from the year 2000 to the present day with projections for growth to the year 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the population of India and China from the year 2000 to the present day with projections for growth to the year 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given line graph illustrates how the number of
people
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 in India and China has grown from 2000 until now and how it might continue growing up to 2050.
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, it can be clearly seen that
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 the population of India will keep growing, the number of
people
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 in China will decrease slightly towards the end of the period shown. There were 1
billion
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people
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 in 2000 in India. The population has been gradually growing since
then
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 reaching 1.4
billion
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 by 2025. The expectancy is that it will increase by half a
billion
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, more or less, every 5 years, being 1.5
billion
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 and nearly 1.55
billion
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 in 2030 and 2040 respectively. It will end up reaching 1.6
billion
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people
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 in 2050.
On the other hand
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, the number of
people
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 living in China in 2000 was 1.1
billion
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. It has gone up steadily
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to almost 1.45
billion
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 in 2025. The numbers will remain the same for the following 5 years. From 2030 onwards the population will suffer a small decrease and it will be around 1.39
billion
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people
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 in 2050.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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