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The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two maps show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. I will summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Overall
Linking Words
 there are
alot
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a lot
 of
dfferentes
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differences
different
difference
 between 1930 and 2010 like now
there
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their
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alot
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are a lot
 of houses and there are no shops and I will
descause
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describe
 the changes between
past
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the past
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 and now. First we see in
village
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the village
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 of Stokeford
at
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in
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 1930 there
are
Wrong verb form
were
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 2 shops and that was good because the families
need a near
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needed nearby
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shop's
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shops
shop
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 to
went
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go
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 to and there
was
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were
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 so many farmlands and one of them
close
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was close
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 to the bridge and a few houses and 1 large house. But like we see on the other map there is no farmland and shops and
Instead
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 of them
thay
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there
bulid
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build
 so many houses and the 1 big house became a retirement home without
garden
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a garden
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 and the
primart
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primary
 school became bigger but there is one place
does
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that does
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 not
cnage
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change
 it is the post office.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 80%.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • village
  • maps
  • Stokeford
  • 1930
  • 2010
  • main features
  • overview
  • changes
  • similarities
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