The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the peercentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparision where relevant.

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displays the earning of one nation’s export petroleum

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, engineered goods,

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and

jewelry

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, agricultural

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and textiles from 2015 to 2016. The

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illustrates the proportion change in various categories of exports by comparing 2016 and 2015.

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shown

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that

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had

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an

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increased year on year, except

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and

jewelry

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experienced a slight decline.

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illustration shows

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the same trend as the

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. In 2015, petroleum

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and agricultural

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both experienced a slight rise from just above $60

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to approximately $64

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and 22

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to 23

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in 2016.

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Textiles experienced a notable change with the

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sharply

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from 26

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to 32

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in 2016. The second most increased was engineered

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with around 6

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increases.

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declined from 64

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to 62

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in 2016. The

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and the

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positive

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correlation, the

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shows that

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to the

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year the

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of textiles had

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15.24

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%,

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was the biggest

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other categories. The remaining increase percentage

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change was 8.5%, 5.18%, 3%, and 0.81% respectively.

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of

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5.18%.