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The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast food. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shows below.

The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast food. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shows below.
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The bar chart displays the
amount
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 of expenditure on fast
food
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 in the UK per week by the income
group
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 in 1990 and the line chart illustrates the trends in
food
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 consumption from 1970 to 1990.
Overall
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, it is evident that
high-income
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the high-income
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 earnings
group
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 spent a higher
amount
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 on fast
food
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,
whereas
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 the least
amount
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 was spent by
low-income
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the low-income
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group
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. On the one hand,
the
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a
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 higher
amount
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 was spent to purchase hamburgers and pizza by high-income groups around 42 and 19, respectively.
Moreover
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, the second most high-paying
food
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 item was fish and chips which was by the average income
group
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 of 25.
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,
low-income
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the low-income
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group
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 pays the least
amount
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 of money for all items fast
food
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, hamburgers just under 15, fish and chips just above 15, and pizza just above 5.
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, in the year 1970, hamburgers and fish and chips were the least popular among UK residents with a number of just under 100 for both, which surged gradually until 1980 and after that, it rose dramatically up to 500 and just under 300, respectively in 1990.
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, pizza was the most loved by residents, which decreased in popularity with time and reached just over 200, in 1990.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, food, group with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 3 times.
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