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The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Beka

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Beka
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The provided diagrams illustrate how an industrial
area
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 in the town of Norbiton will be upgraded in future development.
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, there will be a considerable development of the settlement over the future days and it is going to be gradually transformed from an industrial
area
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 into a large residential
area
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.
This
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 will be a very good project for the city, because
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this
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 city will be cleaner. Future development includes the construction of new roads and a roundabout on these roads, a bridge will be built across the river to the North
side
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 of
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area
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the area
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. The farmland will be moved to the East
side
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 along the river. Let’s talk about
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new buildings and
constructions
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. The factories will be converted into new residential buildings. On the North
side
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 of the
area
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 , on the other
side
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 of
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the river
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river
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river,
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 a new big house will be constructed . On the West
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side
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side,
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 we will be able to see three new houses and shops. On the east
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side
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a new houses
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new houses
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, school , playground and a medical centre will be opened. In
general
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 it will be built: 7 residential houses and 4 necessary structures.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words area, side with synonyms.
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