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The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990, 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990, 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided table illustrates the
quanitiy
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quantity
 of
milk
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 produced by four different countries namely
Netherlands
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the Netherlands
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, Australia, Tanzania and Guatemala in three distinct years 1990, 2000, and 2010 respectively. In all three years,
Netherlands
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the Netherlands
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 stand at the top of the table in regards to the production of
milk
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. In the year
1990
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1990,
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 the country manufactured 11,262,000 litres of
milk
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, followed by 11,155,000 and 11,466,000 during 2000 and 2010. Australia, being the second highest, produced 11,246,000 and 11,105,000 and 9,165,000
lites
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litres
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milk
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 respectively
through out
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throughout
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 the three given years.  Tanzania and Guatemala stayed at the bottom of
table
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the table
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 with
Guatemela
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Guatemala
produced
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producing
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 only 84,000 litres of
milk
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 in the year 2010 which is even less quantity of
milk
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 produced by Tanzania in 1990.   Another notable data in the graph is that, even though Australia is the second largest producer of
milk
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, the nation exhibited a decline in production from 1990 to 2010, unlike all other countries,
who
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 had demonstrated an increase in production.

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