The graphs above give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs above give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar charts compare data about computer ownership and the proportion of the population from 2002 to 2010,
while
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the second chart shows the level of education.
Overall
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, it is readily apparent that all computer ownership rose significantly throughout the period in both charts. In the first bar chart, computer ownership ranked at just under 60% at the beginning of the year.
Then
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it had increased to 60% in 2004. After that, it continues to soar to just over 60% in the middle of the year. Following that,
this
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proportion surged to nearly 80%
at the end
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of the year.
According to
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the second bar chart, no high school diploma was the lowest percentage of education in 2002 han ranked at just over 10%,
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qualification made the most contribution to education with approximately 73%. Afterwards, these had a noticeable growth to 40% and 90%, respectively. High graduates stood at 35% in 2002 and it had a marked rise to 65% in 2010. College grew moderately from 52% to 83% in 2010 and bachelor's degree rose by 15% in 2010

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • computer ownership
  • percentage of the population
  • level of education
  • comparison
  • trend
  • increase/decrease
  • no-qualification
  • secondary
  • post-secondary
  • graduate education
  • digital divide
  • socio-economic factors
  • technological advancement
  • accessibility
  • demographics
  • statistical data
  • data interpretation
  • significant growth
  • fluctuations
  • proliferation
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