IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 7

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purpose in six areas of the world.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purpose in six areas of the world.
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The pie charts illustrate the percentage of
water
Use synonyms
 consumed for a variety
purposes
Change preposition
of purposes
show examples
 in six countries of the world.
Overall
Linking Words
, South America, Africa, Central Asia, and South East Asia accounted for the most
water
Use synonyms
 used in agriculture.
On the contrary
Linking Words
, most
water
Use synonyms
 used in South America and Europe is industrial. Central Asia was the most consumed
water
Use synonyms
 used in farming among other countries with 88%,
however
Linking Words
, the remaining
water
Use synonyms
use
Use synonyms
 in domestic and industrial present the least
use
Use synonyms
 with 7% and 5% respectively.
Water
Use synonyms
 used in Africa for agriculture
use
Use synonyms
 was the second highest for using
water
Use synonyms
 in planting, the remaining domestic and industrial had shared a similar value with 9% and 7% respectively. South America
use
Use synonyms
water
Use synonyms
 in farming nearly three quarters,
then
Linking Words
Use synonyms
water
Add an article
the water
show examples
 used in domestic had accounted for 19% which was the highest in using
water
Use synonyms
 In domestic. Europe had the greatest
use
Use synonyms
 of
water
Use synonyms
 in industrial had just over half of
water
Use synonyms
,
then
Linking Words
water
Use synonyms
use
Use synonyms
 in agriculture was the second least with 39% among other countries,
then
Linking Words
 domestic
use
Use synonyms
 of
water
Use synonyms
 with 13%.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, use with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
▼
What to do next:
Look at other essays: