A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: •give contact details for when you are away •give instructions on how to care for your pet •describe other household duties

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Dear John, I hope

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message finds you well. I am writing

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letter to share some details on how to take care of my house

while

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I am away. First of all, I want to express my sincere gratitude to you for agreeing to look after my home next week. Earlier, I was worried about leaving my pet alone but now, I can go on vacation unembundered. Well, I will be visiting my brother in London for

holidays

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the holidays

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and if you need to reach out to me for anything, I will be available at

mobile

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apply

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+44995 235 2322. My pet responds to the name - Judo. It has a daily habit of taking

morning

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a morning

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walk at 7 AM during which it relieves itself. I feed him daily two times a day - mornings and evenings.

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, I

will

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would

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appreciate it if you

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could

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water plants

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the balcony once in two days to keep them alive. If you want to recreate yourself at my home, please feel free to play video games. I hope you will have a good time next week at my place. Please don't

hestiate

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hesitate

to reach out to me in case of any queries. Best Regards,

Sumit

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sumitdua10Tue Mar 11 2025

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coherence and cohesion

Ensure each paragraph has a clear focus. Consider separating the pet care instructions from household duties into distinct paragraphs.

task response

A few grammatical errors were present, such as ‘unembundered’ (possibly meant 'unencumbered') and ‘hestitate’ (it should be 'hesitate'). Make sure to proofread for minor errors before finalizing your letter.

task achievement

You provided clear contact details and expressed gratitude, which makes the tone friendly and warm.

coherence and cohesion

Instructions for pet care were detailed and easy to understand, ensuring that your friend will know how to care for Judo.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

202 words

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