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The chart below shows the GDP growth per year for three countries between 2007 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

The chart below shows the GDP growth per year for three countries between 2007 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
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The chart provides information about the annual
rate
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 of
GDP
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growth
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 per year for three countries (Tunisia,
Japan
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 and Ecuador) from 2007 to 2010.
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, Tunisia experienced a decreasing trend in
GDP
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growth
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rate
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 year by year,
while
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 the
GDP
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growth
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rate
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 of
Japan
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 increased in these same years.
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, Ecuador showed a fluctuating trend between 2007 and 2010. Tunisia recorded 3% in 2010, following a significant decrease in the
GDP
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growth
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rate
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 from approximately 6.5% in 2007. The
GDP
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growth
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rate
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 of
Japan
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,
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, showed a sharp increase, and stood at around 6.5% in 2010,
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 it was only 2% in 2007. Ecuador experienced a sharp fall in 2009 and showed approximately 1%, in spite of a significant increase in 2008 recorded 5% rather than 3% in 2007. It ultimately reached around 2% in 2010 with a slight increase rather to 2009. So, in 2010,
Japan
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 had the most
GDP
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growth
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rate
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, in spite of having the least
rate
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 in 2007.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words rate, gdp, growth, japan with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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