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The charts below show the average monthly rainfall in two cities of Brazil, Brasilia and Salvador, in 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Rainfall in mm in Brasilia, Brazil, 2016 350 r - 300 250 E 200- Rainfall ( - 150 - 100 50 0 350 г 300 Jan Feb Mar Apr May Aug Sep Rainfall in mm in Salvador, Brazil, 2016 Oct Nov Dec 250 트 200 fall Rainti - 150 100 50 Jan Feb Mar Apr May Jun Jul Aug Sep Oct Nov Dec

The charts below show the average monthly rainfall in two cities of Brazil, Brasilia and Salvador, in 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Rainfall in mm in Brasilia, Brazil, 2016 350 r - 300 250 E 200- Rainfall ( - 150 - 100 50 0 350 г 300 Jan Feb Mar Apr May Aug Sep Rainfall in mm in Salvador, Brazil, 2016 Oct Nov Dec 250 트 200 fall Rainti - 150 100 50 Jan Feb Mar Apr May Jun Jul Aug Sep Oct Nov Dec
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The bar charts illustrate the average monthly
rainfall
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 in Brasília and Salvador, two Brazilian cities, in 2016.
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, the data reveal significant differences in
rainfall
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 patterns between the two locations, with Brasília experiencing a distinct dry season,
whereas
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 Salvador maintains relatively consistent precipitation throughout the year. In Brasília,
rainfall
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 is highest in January and December, at around 200
mm
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 and 250
mm
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, respectively.
However
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, from March onwards, precipitation declines steadily, reaching its lowest levels in June and July, at approximately 10
mm
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. From August,
rainfall
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 begins to increase again, peaking in the final months of the year.
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, Salvador receives a more stable amount of
rainfall
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. The wettest months are April and May, with precipitation exceeding 300
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.
While
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 there is a slight decline from June to October, monthly
rainfall
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 remains between 150
mm
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 and 200
mm
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, which is significantly higher than Brasília’s driest months.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words rainfall, mm with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "declines" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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