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The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present

The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present
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The diagram illustrates the growth of the countryside called Ryemouth from 1995 till now.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 the places have been converted from
agrecultural
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agricultural
Use synonyms
village
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villages
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 to
touristic
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tourist
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destination
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destinations
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. Looking at the maps
more
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for more
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 details. The farmland and forest park located Eastern part of the
village
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have
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has
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 been turned
to
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into
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golf
Correct article usage
a golf
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 area including
tennis
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a tennis
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cort
Correct your spelling
court
. In the given periods. The number of
residentional
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residential
area
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areas
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 in the
village
Use synonyms
 has been improved.
Additionally
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,
restaurant
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restaurants
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has
Correct subject-verb agreement
have
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 been constructed
instead
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 of markets
of
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in
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 the
village
Use synonyms
. In
South
Correct article usage
the South
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 of the
Ryemouth
Add a comma
Ryemouth,
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 there used to be along fish market that has been replaced with
apartment
Correct article usage
an apartment
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. The cafe has
been remained
Change to the active voice
remained
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 in the same place
as well as
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 fishing part has been
build
Wrong verb form
built
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in
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on
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 the shore of the sea

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words village with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Urban development
  • Infrastructure
  • Residential area
  • Commercial district
  • Public amenities
  • Greenery
  • Renovation
  • Expansion
  • Demolition
  • Construction
  • Accessibility
  • Public transport
  • Urbanization
  • Evolution
  • Gentrification
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