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The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the "Minfeatures, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the "Minfeatures, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart displays the fraction of the
population
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 for those aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040.
Overall
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, in the
future
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,
Japan
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 will have a larger
population
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 than the US and
Sweden
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.
USA
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The USA
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 and
Sweden
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's
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population
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populations
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 will increase nearly
by
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double in the
future
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.
Japan
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 had the smallest
population
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 of the others. In 1940,
Japan
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 had a smaller
population
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 than
Sweden
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 and America by 5%.
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, it is projected that
Japan
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's
population
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 will increase dramatically in 2040 by just over 25%, which will make it the largest in the chart. America had 10% of the aged people, which made it the largest in 1940. The
population
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 of the US will grow gradually by nearly 23% in 2040, which will have a smaller
population
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 than the others
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in
 the
future
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.
Sweden
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 started by just over 5% in 1940, and it is predicted to be in
the
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second place after
Japan
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 in the
future
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 by 25% with its
population
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 that will grow dramatically respectively.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, future, japan, sweden with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.
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