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The chart shows requests for in formations at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from january to June. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant. The chart shows requests for in formations at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from january to June. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The chart shows requests for in formations at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from january to June. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant. The chart shows requests for in formations at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from january to June. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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The line graph provides information on the number of
people
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 who ask for assistance at a tourist centre in the UK, in a period of 6 months from January to June. In general, we can see that out of all methods, there is only email contact received a downward trend.
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, the most popular method is asking face-to-face. In detail, the number of
people
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 who send mail to the office fell gradually from roughly 700 individuals in January to under 400 in May. After that, it remains stable until June. Meanwhile, callers to the
center
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centre
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 slightly decreased in the first 2 months, from 900 to 800, before increasing to 1600
people
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 in June. As regards
to
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apply
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the most popular methods, it rises significantly from over 400
people
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 at the beginning of the timeline until the end of it at 1900 requests.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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