The diagrams below show the main reasons workers chose to work from home and the hours males and females worked at home for the year 2019. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the main reasons workers chose to work from home and the hours males and females worked at home for the year 2019. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagrams below show the main reasons workers chose to work from home and the hours males and females worked at home for the year 2019. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graphs display the most common reasons for working remotely and how much time they worked per week in 2019.
Overall
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according to
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the chart male and female employers prefer working from home to save money.
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Males
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worked more than
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per week. At the top of the table, people prefer to
work
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remotely to save money and the proportion of
males
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and
females
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is 45% and 42%, respectively. For
males
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, they think they were more productive by 24% more than
females
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which they almost 11%.
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,
females
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feel it
easier
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care
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of
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their children when they are at home with 26%
whereas
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men by 4%.
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but not least, men who
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over 30 hours per week 81% more than women by 6%.
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contrast, women
work
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under 10 hours more than men by 74% but
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3%. They both
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10 to 30 hours
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22% and 16%.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words males, females, work with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • commute
  • flexible schedule
  • family responsibilities
  • gender roles
  • professional duties
  • societal trends
  • economic responsibility
  • home-working hours
  • traditional roles
  • male-dominated industries
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