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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The six pie charts give information about the proportion of
water
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 consumption for different reasons in the 6 regions of the world. At first glance,
it is clear that
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, with almost three-third of the total
usage
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, agricultural activities contribute the most of the consumption in all areas except North America and Europe where industrial
water
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usage
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 leads the consumption of around half of the total value in both. Agricultural
usage
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 accounts for 71%, 81%, 84% and 88% of South America, South
Asia
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, Africa and Central
Asia
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 respectively which makes Central
Asia
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 spend the highest amount of
water
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 for farming. Domestic
usage
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 ,
on the other hand
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,
is varying
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 from 7% to 19% and the least
usage
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 is seen in South East
Asia
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, North America and Europe with below 10
percent
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 each. When it comes to Industrial
usage
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, Central
Asia
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 has the lowest value spending only 5% on
water
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 and Europe is the one that contributes 53% of the
water
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 to industrial activities.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, usage, asia with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • water consumption
  • agricultural, industrial, domestic
  • usage patterns
  • developed vs developing regions
  • irrigation systems
  • climate factors
  • percentage breakdown
  • water management
  • sustainability
  • residential water use
  • efficiency
  • charts comparison
  • water-intensive
  • water scarcity
  • resource allocation
  • desalination
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