The chart below shows the Japan's population by age groups starting in 1960 and including a forecast to 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. AT LEAST 150 WORDS – 190 WORDS

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the Japan's population by age groups starting in 1960 and including a forecast to 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. AT LEAST 150 WORDS – 190 WORDS

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We can observe

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the line graph of Japan’s population, it illustrates the percentage of each age group, which started in 1960 and

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be predicted in 2040. As our observation,

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data

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depicts that the young and working age have the signs to decrease consecutively. At

first,

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keep your eyes on the youngest generation (0-14).

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rose

sightly

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from

approximate

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69% to over 72%,

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abruptly dropped dramatically up to now and it

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to be climbed scarcely in 2040.

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, the working age (15-64)

grown

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relatively in the 60s-70s, after

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it stepped down tremendously and it might

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not

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go up again.

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, the

aging

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group (which shows the

eldery

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residents) climbed up partly from the 70s to the 80s,

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to increase substantially. In 2040, it

maybe

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gain

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considerately

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account

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for 39%, nearly

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half of the population.

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reflects the reality of Japan

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people become older, the birth accuracy has stepped sharply.

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is the difficulty that

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country has to face.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

2 paragraphs

176 words

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