GT A friend of yours has recently written to you asking for advice about a problem at work. You have had a similar problem at your workplace in the past. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, tell your friend how you feel about the problem explain how you faced a similar situation in the past suggest possible solutions to the problem

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Hello, I hope

this

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letter finds you well. I have got

same

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the same

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as your problem at my job so I will give you

advises

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advice

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and

solution

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a solution

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for

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your problem.

Last

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year I damaged a computer at my workplace,

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and I

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felt nervous about that,

However

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, I just bought a new

computre

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computer

for $400 even though It was easy to solve

this

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problem so you should not feel nervous.

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, The

computre

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computer

was used by my college so I felt a little nervous. I

borrow

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to him my own

computre

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computer

while

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I was buying a new one.

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Although

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However

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, You should not tell anyone at your workplace. At night you go to your company and

replaced

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the damaged one

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with

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a new one. Thank you, I am looking forward to hearing back from you. Kim Sincerely

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coherence and cohesion

Try to provide a clearer structure to your letter. Separate your feelings, past experiences, and solutions into different paragraphs.

task achievement

Be mindful of spelling errors, such as 'computre' instead of 'computer' and 'advices' instead of 'advice'.

task achievement

You effectively shared your personal experience, which can be relatable for your friend.

suitable writing tone

Your friendly tone sets a positive mood for the letter, which is great for effective communication.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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5
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

<4

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

133 words

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