The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in england and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main deatures, and mae comparison where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in england and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main deatures, and mae comparison where relevant.

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The bar graph displays the proportion of homes in owned and rented

accommodation

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in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.

Overall

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, the percentage of households in

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decreased significantly throughout the given period.

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, rented

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experienced a dramatic upward trend. The homeownership rate was about 75% in 1918 before seeing a significant decrease to 50% in 1971 to reach the same proportion as renting homes.

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, the

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stability for a decade from 1991 to 2001 at up to 30%.

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, there was a slight growth to around 35% eventually.

On the other hand

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, there was a dramatic rise in renting

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from nearly 22% at the start, when the variation between

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categories was the highest, around 50%, to reach the peak at under 70% in 1991.

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, the rate dropped slightly

at the end

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at about 63%.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Vocabulary: Replace the words accommodation with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "dramatic" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

146 words

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The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in england and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main deatures, and mae comparison where relevant.

Some people think that it is effective for students to study in a group at school, while others think it is better to study alone. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.