The graph shows the proportion of energy that was produced from coal in four European countries from 1995 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The graph shows the proportion of energy that was produced from coal in four European countries from 1995 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The line diagram represents the percentage of energy produced by coal in Sweden,
France
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, Denmark, and Germany between 1995 and 2010. In the big picture, it is conspicuous that all categories exhibited a downward trend in the time frame. Focusing on Germany and Denmark, both of them plummeted in the initial period by 50%,
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continued to touch 18% and 10%, respectively in 2010. Unlike Denmark declined continuously from 2004 to 2010, Germany had a gradual climb by a tenth, after falling and touching the bottom at 5%. Turning to the rest of the nations, Sweden and
France
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had the same trend in over 15 years. In the beginning period, Sweden stood higher than
France
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at far below 40%,
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decreased slowly until 2024 and remained constant at around 27%.
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,
France
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remained stable at around 20% to 30 % with a low fluctuation
at the end
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of 12 years, before dropping from 30%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words france with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • percentage
  • energy production
  • coal
  • fluctuate
  • trend
  • notable
  • significant
  • decrease
  • increase
  • stable
  • policy changes
  • technological advancements
  • alternative energy sources
  • compare
  • contrast
  • similarities
  • differences
  • anomalies
  • outliers
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