The given
diagram
demonstrates transformation over a Use synonyms
20 year
period.
Add a hyphen
20-year
Overall
,looking at the Linking Words
diagram
Use synonyms
,
can be seen many changes over the years .Remove the comma
apply
Such
as the expansion of the zone ,the construction of new Linking Words
buildings
and Use synonyms
increase
in the Correct article usage
an increase
number
of students.
In the first Use synonyms
diagram
from 2004 , can be seen that the zone was smaller compared Use synonyms
2024
.Change preposition
to 2024
In two
schools together had a total of 600 students.In the first Change preposition
Two
diagram
more Use synonyms
place
for trees ,with only two Fix the agreement mistake
places
schools
Change the noun form
school
buildings
and Use synonyms
sports
Correct article usage
a sports
field
,Use synonyms
long
path to the Correct article usage
a long
field
and one park nearby .
In the second Use synonyms
diagram
from 2024 , the transformation Use synonyms
more
evident .Most clearly the Add a missing verb
is more
number
of students has significantly increased ,Use synonyms
reached
the Wrong verb form
reaching
number
1000.Because of which were contraction these Use synonyms
buildings
.Use synonyms
Also
Linking Words
instead
sports Linking Words
field
Use synonyms
were
erected Correct subject-verb agreement
was
new
school school Correct article usage
a new
number
3 and a nearby car park Use synonyms
number
2 .The sports Use synonyms
field
can be seen the first and second Use synonyms
buildings
were connected among themselves,because of which reduced the path .Use synonyms
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