The diagrams below show the site of a school in 2004 and the plan for changes to the school site in 2024. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the site of a school in 2004 and the plan for changes to the school site in 2024. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagrams below show the site of a school in 2004 and the plan for changes to the school site in 2024. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given
diagram
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demonstrates transformation over a
20 year
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period.
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,looking at the
diagram
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,
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can be seen many changes over the years .
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as the expansion of the zone ,the construction of new
buildings
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and
increase
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an increase
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in the
number
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of students. In the first
diagram
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from 2004 , can be seen that the zone was smaller compared
2024
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.
In two
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schools together had a total of 600 students.In the first
diagram
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more
place
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places
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for trees ,with only two
schools
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school
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buildings
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and
sports
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a sports
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field
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,
long
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a long
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path to the
field
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and one park nearby . In the second
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from 2024 , the transformation
more
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evident .Most clearly the
number
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of students has significantly increased ,
reached
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reaching
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the
number
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1000.Because of which were contraction these
buildings
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.
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instead
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sports
field
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were
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was
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erected
new
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a new
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school school
number
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3 and a nearby car park
number
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2 .The sports
field
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can be seen the first and second
buildings
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were connected among themselves,because of which reduced the path .

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words diagram, buildings, number, field with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • diagram
  • layout
  • facility
  • infrastructure
  • main building
  • green area
  • sports hall
  • library
  • expanded
  • recreational activities
  • structural improvements
  • accommodate
  • enrollment
  • renovation
  • development
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