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The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course.The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course.The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the percentages of different situations about the anthropology
graduates
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 from one university and the given table shows how much salaries did the
anthropropology
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anthropology
graduates
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 gain after five years'
work
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 .
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,
it is clear that
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 there were over half
percents
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 of
graduates
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join
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the
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apply
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full-time
work
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 and the whole
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 of
other
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the other
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 five situations account for 48%.There were four levels of
the
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salaries from 2.5million to over 0.1 billion obtained by the
graduates
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 and three types of
employments
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employment
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 including freelance consultants,government sector and private companies.
According to
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 the par chart,there were 15%
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graduates
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taking
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 part in part-time
work
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 and 12%
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graduates
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being
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 unemployed.The
precents
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percentage
 of the
graduates
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 who
was
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 in full-time postgrad study or not known shared the same amount.Only 5%
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graduates
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 took part in the postgrad study and part-time
work
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 at the same time.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words graduates, work with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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