The graph below shows food consumption in Australia between 1950 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The graph below shows food consumption in Australia between 1950 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The chart displays the
consumption
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of eating products from vegetables, fruit, meat, bread, and seafood in Australia from 1950 to 2010.  
Overall
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, vegetables had the highest food
consumption
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in Australia throughout the given
period
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.
In contrast
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, seafood continued to remain steady
as
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at
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the lowest rate. Bread and meat saw a slight fluctuation over time,
while
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fruit increased sharply
most
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for most
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of the
period
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.   In 1950, the
consumption
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of vegetables started at 140
kg
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and fluctuated steadily before reaching a peak at 160
kg
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in 2010,
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seafood remained the same at 20 in the whole
period
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.   The fruit stood at 80 and experienced a modest difference for 20 years before growing rapidly to 140
kg
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in 2010. Meat, which was the second
consumption
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for most of the
period
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from 1950 to 1990, eventually ranked third at 80
kg
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,
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bread, which witnessed a steady variance, ended up at 60
kg
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in 2010.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, period, kg with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
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