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Band 5

You recently had lunch at a restaurant and accidentally left behind a valuable item. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter: When and where you lunched What item you left behind What you would like them to do

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Dear Madam, I am writing
this
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 letter to inform you that I accidentally left behind my iPhone 16 Pro Max at your
restaurant
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. I am a regular customer of your
restaurant
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 with my friends. Because your
restaurant
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 is located opposite our university. What's more, your
restaurant
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's
meal
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meals
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 meet my
demand
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 100
percent
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per cent
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. The things I like the most in your
restaurant
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 are desserts. That's why we often visit it. Recently, I had lunch at your
restaurant
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 called "Velvet Bistro" with my friends. But I accidentally left behind my iPhone 16 Pro Max at your
restaurant
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. I can not afford to buy one at the moment. My dad bought me that
phone
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 for my birthday. It was really precious to me. When I noticed that I left behind my
phone
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, I was stressed out and I decided to write a letter to you. I would be grateful if you find my
phone
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.
Pleasein
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Please
 case you find my
phone
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, let me know. Once again, I am really upset about
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 situation. I am looking forward to your response.
Your
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 truly, Billura

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coherence and cohesion
Consider organizing the letter with clear paragraphs focused on specific ideas. This will enhance readability.
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Make sure to clearly articulate your request in the conclusion. Specify how you'd prefer to be contacted regarding your phone.
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You provided a clear description of the item left behind and its importance to you, which adds a personal touch to the letter.
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Your expression of distress about losing the item conveys a genuine emotional response, which engages the reader.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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