The bar chart shows the information of the number of volunteers and paid workers in 4 different roles in the sports sector of an Australian town in 2015.

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bar chart compares the figures of who worked for paid or not in 4 different departments, including coaching, referees, therapy and other

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in the sports industry of an Australian area in 2015.

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, the sum of who is responsible for coaching, judging and treating were significantly higher than those in other

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. Among these three job groups, the amounts of coaches, no matter volunteers or formal jobs, account for the most proportion in

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period (2015). For the paid workers, the number of instructors who were paid was just over 70, which was almost two-fold more than the figures for referees (around 30) and therapists (about 45).

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, despite the higher value in the amount of staff in other

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compared with referees and therapists, the number of trainers was still around 15% higher

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. As for volunteers, there was not a considerable difference among the numbers of coaches, judges, and athletic trainers, with roughly 42, 39 and 41. Interestingly, there was a distinct trend in volunteers compared to paid workers. To be more specific, the number of people in other

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was obviously more than those who worked as other three jobs.