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The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevante.

The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevante.
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The line chart illustrates the sum of money utilised on
books
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 in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005. The data is measured in US dollars millions.
Overall
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, it is evident that the spending of all four countries on
books
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 increased over time.
While
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 the major expenses made Austria's people on
books
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. By observing the chart, it can be seen that in 1995, Germany spent $80
million
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 on
books
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, which inclined to $90
million
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 in 1997, and recorded over $92
million
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 in 2005. Austria made an expenditure of $30
million
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 on
books
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 in the initial year, which started to grow and reached $71
million
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 in the
last
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 year.
Furthermore
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, French people were spending approximately $55
million
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 in 1995, which constantly rose and in the
last
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 year, it was $73
million
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.
Moreover
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, Italians were investing $50
million
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 in 1995, which increased in 1997, and again declined to $50
million
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 in 1999. After that, it slightly escalated and noticed $60
million
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 in 2005.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words books, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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