The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in two years.Write a report for a university lecturer reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.dung

The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in two years.Write a report for a university lecturer reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.dung
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in two years.Write a report for a university lecturer reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.dung
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The charts compare various types
proportions
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of proportions
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of the amount of
energy
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produced in the year
of
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apply
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1995 and 2005 in France.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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Coal, Gas, and Petro were the highest
form
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forms
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of
energy
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generation,
whereas
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the Nuclear and other categories were the
least
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lowest
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in percentage in the year
of
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apply
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1995. France
were
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was
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producing
energy
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mostly in the following classification which
are
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is
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Coal forming 29.90% in 1995 , and 30,93% in 2005
while
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being
the
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apply
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predominant in both years.
Similiarly
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Similarly
, the second category was coal which
was making
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made
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a percentage up to 29.63% in the first period, and it rose
slighly
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slightly
till
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to
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30.32% in 2005. Petro is the least
from
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of
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the leading categories which comprised approximately 30% in 1995 and
then
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it had a sharp decline in 2005 nearly to one-fifth. The
least
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last
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production kinds of
energy
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were Nucular and others which were both less than 7%,
however
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, it
grow
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grew
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until it reached just close to 10 in both types.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words energy with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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