In recent years, many students
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with their parents
some prefer to stay away from home because their universities or colleges are
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different regions. From my perspective,
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of living away from home significantly
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the disadvantages.
with,
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of staying with family. Students really enjoy and have a hearty lunch together. One can even share feelings and thoughts with each other and get advice or suggestions
.
, family sickness never be a problem for learners.
, teenagers after a long busy day at
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place, play with their siblings or parents
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can automatically boost
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their mind and energy
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.
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, living with family plays an important role in fostering emotional value too.
, in my opinion,
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who
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away from home have more advantages than
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disadvantages because people learn more about
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and freedom. To elaborate
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, they develop social skills by learning about various cultures when
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with a group in
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or
.
, students start buying things
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their own,
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up early in the morning. They become a good responsible person.
, face some difficulties but learn to overcome the situations
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time.
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exposure can lead to greater success in their careers.
In conclusion, both have their own benefits but staying away from family for
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really
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an indispensable role which makes a huge difference in their success.
, its advantages definitely
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the disadvantages.