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Writing Samples
Band 5

You live near a busy outdoor market. You like the market but you have noticed a problem with it. Write a letter to the manager of the outdoor market. In your letter -Say why you like the outdoor market. -Describe the problem you have noticed. -Suggest how the problem could be solved.

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Dear Sir, I hope you are doing great.
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 been a long time to see you.The initiative to open a market
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 our housing complex is really applaudable. it is very convenient
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 me to go there is the most reason i like about
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 have encountered
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the problem
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noice
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noise
 pollution. As
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 observed it is Caused by the customer who brings their own vehicle.As a responsible member of the complex
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 being as a
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 would like to bring
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 matter
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 your notice.
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 to solve
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 issue
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 would like to suggest you
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reopen the old commercial parking lot which is around 1 mile away from
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 parking complex.
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 results effectively in reduction of the noise pollution. looking forward to
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 from you and if you need any help complex committee is always here for you.
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 hope you have a good time ahead. Sincerely —name

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Coherence and Cohesion
Make sure to proofread your letter for spelling and grammar errors, as these can affect clarity. Pay attention to capital letters at the beginning of sentences and proper nouns.
Coherence and Cohesion
Try to separate your ideas into distinct paragraphs, ensuring that each paragraph focuses on one main point. This will enhance readability.
Task Achievement
Provide more specific details or examples when describing the problem and your suggested solution to strengthen your response.
Task Achievement
Consider using more varied vocabulary and sentence structures to improve engagement and clarity.
Task Achievement
You made a good effort in expressing your appreciation for the market and addressing a relevant issue.
Task Achievement
The letter has a polite tone, which is important for this type of communication.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • vibrant
  • atmosphere
  • local crafts
  • fresh produce
  • community spirit
  • litter
  • waste disposal
  • overflowing bins
  • unpleasant environment
  • cleanliness
  • sustainability
  • implementing solutions
  • environmental impact
  • community engagement
  • regular maintenance
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