You have heard that one of your friends will be doing voluntary work at a festival. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter ask about what type of festival your friend is volunteering at and when and where it will take place ask what your friend will have to do as part of the voluntary work ask if the organisers are still looking for more volunteers and how you can apply for the work

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Dear pat. I hope you are doing well today. I miss you very much

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friend. I have heard you are volunteering at a festival.

Thus

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I want to know what kind of situation will be and the responsibility of voluntar. Will it be difficult

work

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to work

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for

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example

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example,

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if I try to work.

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Also

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Also,

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I want to know where it will take place, is it far from my destination?

Furthermore

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, can you tell me the date of the festival? I will be glad

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apply

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if I take part

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this

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festival. I would like to know

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apply

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if the organisers are still looking for more volunteers

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we could see

eachother

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each other

if took part. We will have great time and fun together. Do you know? Where can I apply for the work? I hope they are still looking for some guys. Because I really want to take part

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festival

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the festival

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. But you must remember I have

problem

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littel

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little

with my shoulder, we

had

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played football when I broke it. I hope it will not be

hardwork

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hard work

there.

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coherence and cohesion

Make sure to clearly separate your ideas into distinct paragraphs. Each paragraph should focus on a single topic to improve clarity.

task achievement

Try to use more varied vocabulary and sentence structures to enhance your writing. This will make your letter more engaging.

task achievement

You have used a friendly tone throughout the letter, which is appropriate for writing to a friend.

coherence and cohesion

The letter includes direct questions to your friend, encouraging a response which shows engagement.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

175 words

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