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The charts show the share of global manufacturing and exports for four countries between 1985 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.

The charts show the share of global manufacturing and exports for four countries between 1985 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate the percentage of global manufacturing and exports for four countries over a period of 20
years
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 divided into six categories .
overall
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it is clear that
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was
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 the largest percentage in both
years
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,
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represented
represanted
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representing
 40% in 2040 and and 41% in 2060 .
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the
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manufacturing was quite similar in both
years
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 at around 32%.
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,Agriculture has
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a signifecant
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signifecant
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significant
 drop in 2060.In terms
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 Into-com Tech has slightly raised by 1% .
To sum up
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, all over the categories have a
suble
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subtle
 changes over 20
years
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 of time .

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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