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Band 4.5

Cooking food is a waste of time in today’s hectic life. Fast food restaurants are helpful in modern living and it is less stressful. Do you agree or disagree?

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Cooking
food
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out
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our
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time
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 is a waste of
time
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 as you can spend
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 and money on some other things, is that most people think nowadays.
On
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 my
opinion
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 it's only partially true
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, fast
food
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 it's
good
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a good
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 choice if you
won'
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don't
t
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cook
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, can'
t
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 do that, you are lazy
of
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or
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 so but
from
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on
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other
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 hand, it's not healthy, you don'
t
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 know if there
were
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is
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 fresh meat
ot
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or
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Also
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food
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 delivery in most
cases
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 more expensive than
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cook
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cooking
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 at home (if's
its
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apply
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not
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 some cheap fast
food
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)
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, if you have
family
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a family
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,
cook
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 together it's
also
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 spending
time
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together with
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 your
Wif
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Wife
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/Husband
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for
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, for
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 example, part of your
like
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life
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, not just to feed yourself, not about
food
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.
Actually
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 I'm using
food
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 delivery in my life but not very
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often
offten
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often
, only in
cases
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 when I
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really
realy
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really
 don'
t
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 have
time
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 to
cook
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, in all other
cases
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 I prefer to do that myself as it's
also
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great
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a great
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 experience, you are learning, making mistakes but still proud of
result
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the result
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, keep doing more and more, of
course
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course,
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 you can say that it's easy to try
same
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some
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food
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 in
restaurant
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a restaurant
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, but why don'
t
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 try to do it by your own, feel all that process, emotions I
supose
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suppose
 that more people would prefer
food
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 delivery as it's
fast
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the fast
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 and less stressful way and home
food
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not
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is not
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 in trend anymore but
advantages
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the advantages
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 of
coocking
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cooking
 by yourself
much
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are much
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 more,
more cheap
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cheaper
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, you know what you eat, you can make a
compliment
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complement
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to
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apply
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other person
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another person
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 who cocked for you In conclusion, I rather choose cooking, spending
time
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to buy
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buying
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 products,
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cook
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cooking
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, spend
time
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 with fun during that process but still in
cases
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 when you can'
t
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cook
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 some specific
food
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 but want to try
or
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it or
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 just don'
t
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 have
time
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, fast
food
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 has
place
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a place
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 to be there.

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coherence and cohesion
Improve sentence structure and grammar for better understanding. Try to consolidate your thoughts into complete sentences.
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Expand on your points with more detailed examples and explanations to strengthen your arguments.
coherence and cohesion
Make sure to check spelling and punctuation for a more polished final draft.
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The essay presents a balanced view, considering both cooking at home and fast food options.
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Personal experiences about using food delivery add a relatable touch to your argument.

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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Hectic life
  • Convenience
  • Time-saving
  • Modern living
  • Nutritional value
  • Urban areas
  • Strategically located
  • Fast-paced lifestyles
  • Dietary habits
  • Health outcomes
  • Irritability
  • Fatigue
  • Family bonding
  • Meal preparation
  • Poor nutrition
  • Stress reduction
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