The map below shows three proposed sites for a new supermarket (A, B and C) in the city of Ellington. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows three proposed sites for a new supermarket (A, B and C) in the city of Ellington. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The map below shows three proposed sites for a new supermarket (A, B and C) in the city of Ellington. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The picture illustrates the map of
the
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Ellington
city
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and three different places for the construction of
new
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a new
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supermarket. Most business owners try to locate their market near
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residential areas,
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,
option
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C and A are much better locations.
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with
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site A, it
surrounded
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by
the
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houses and the railway separates it from the industrial area. The park and traffic-free zone are
also
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not very far from A. Even though there is no motorway nearby, it would
the
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best choice to build
new
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a new
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shopping
center
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here. Site C is
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located near the residential area, but, not as close as A. There is
also
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same
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railway that
constructed
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between the C and local industry.
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, it is on the village side and it can negatively influence
for
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the
developing
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of the business.
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,
the
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location B is
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available, even
it
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though it
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is located far side of the countryside. It has only one advantage
that
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motorway is not too far from
this
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place. Notwithstanding, it is not the best location for new business, especially for
supermarket
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supermarkets
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. It is one of the most significant things that to choose the proper location for every company as it would
effect
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the future of it.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • proposed sites
  • supermarket
  • locations
  • central
  • outskirts
  • residential areas
  • transport hubs
  • proximity
  • major roads
  • landmarks
  • accessibility
  • competition
  • shopping district
  • industrial area
  • green spaces
  • logistic ease
  • isolated
  • densely populated
  • traffic
  • customer reach
  • expansion possibilities
  • accessibility
  • customer base
  • logistical convenience
  • recommend
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