You are visiting another town next month for a short break. write a letter to the tourist information centre. In your letter: Tell them how long you are staying Ask for some suggestion for what to do Find out if there are any local events happening at the time

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Respected sir, I am writing

this

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letter to let you know that I will be

visit

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visiting

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Surrey next month from 14 April to 20 April. It is almost 1 week stay there and I will

be arrived

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arrive

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airport at 11pm sharp on 14 April 2025. To be honest I am totally new and it is my first trip

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Canada so I need a lot of help to make my

vocations

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memorable.

Furthermore

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, It will be praiseable if you can find any accommodation for me. I adore nature so want to spend some time on beaches and lakes. Is it good to invest my precious time there in

this

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weather?

Another

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apply

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I am very good

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most

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apply

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extracuricular

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extracurricular

activities

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which

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that is

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why

wants

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want

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to participate in different events to polish my skills and express my hidden talent in front of others.

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but not least, I am

little

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a little

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bit confused

that

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about

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what stuff need to bring with me. It

will

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would

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be appreciate

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be appreciated

be appreciating

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if you

can

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could

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clear my

doubt

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doubts

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about packing

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apply

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clothes,

footwears

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footwear

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, and jewellery. I hope you

would

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will

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help me to make my visit good and valuable. Yours sincerely Arsh

hoenytoorTue Mar 25 2025

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coherence and cohesion

Consider dividing your letter into clear paragraphs, each focusing on a specific point. This will help enhance the logical structure of your letter.

task achievement

Ensure that sentences are grammatically correct and that your vocabulary is used appropriately. For example, 'appreciate' should be 'appreciated' in the context you've used it.

positive

Your enthusiasm and request for assistance is well-communicated, which makes the letter engaging.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

192 words

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