The process diagram below shows the process of how to puerh tea is made. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Umar

The process diagram below shows the process of how to puerh tea is made. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Umar
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The process diagram below shows the process of how to puerh tea is made. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Umar
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The illustration depicts the procedure of how to pu’erh and the method of making two
type
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types

The singular noun type follows a number other than one. Consider changing the noun to the plural form.

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of
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tea’s
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tea

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raw
tea
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and ripe
tea
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which involves several steps, including rolling,drying,fermentation and
aging
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ageing

The spelling of aging is a non-British variant. For consistency, consider replacing it with the British English spelling.

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with
a slight differences
Correct the article-noun agreement
slight differences
a slight difference

The indefinite article a may not be required with the plural noun differences in this sentence. Consider removing the article, or changing the noun to singular.

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in each kind.
Overall
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,the 7 stages linear , involved several steps of manufacturing two
type
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types

The singular noun type follows a number other than one. Consider changing the noun to the plural form.

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of
the
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apply

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tea
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Raw
tea
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and Ripe
tea
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. That
starting
Wrong verb form
starts

It appears that your sentence or clause uses an incorrect form of the verb starting. Consider changing it.

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with a rolling, drying below the sun and ending with a compression. First of all,
it’s
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’s

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inactivation of enzymes
it
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apply

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means pan frying when they
are
Unnecessary verb
apply

The verb are appears to be unnecessary here.

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change
the
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apply

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colour , that time for
rolling
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the rolling

The noun phrase rolling procedure seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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procedure and drying below the sun
during
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for

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some time ,
moreover
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colour
have
Correct subject-verb agreement
has

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to be
brightly
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bright

Brightly seems to be the wrong part of speech for this context.

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,
subsequently
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making Loose Raw
tea
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,which
throw
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throws

The plural verb throw does not appear to agree with the singular subject Loose Raw tea. Consider changing the verb form for subject-verb agreement.

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the process Fermentation by Mold to create Loose Rip
tea
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, so that can be compressing and became Pu-erh Ripe
tea
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.
On the other hand
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, after
the
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apply

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drying under the sun, it
have
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has

It appears that the subject pronoun it and the verb have are not in agreement. Consider changing the verb.

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another way to make
a
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apply

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tea
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,exactly going to compression , thereby creating Pu-erh Raw
tea
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in turn which must
have
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apply

The verb have appears to be unnecessary here.

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a
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apply

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require
aging
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ageing

The spelling of aging is a non-British variant. For consistency, consider replacing it with the British English spelling.

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,
aging
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ageing

The spelling of aging is a non-British variant. For consistency, consider replacing it with the British English spelling.

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by storage , eventually
form
Wrong verb form
forming

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vintage Pu-erh Raw
tea
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Contractions: Don't use contractions.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words tea with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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