The pie charts show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram compares the percentage of household expenditures from two different nations in 2010. To analyse these pie charts, we begin by taking a closer look at the data presented and it is obvious that Japan's population spent the most budget on the genre of other goods and services;
however
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, people in Malaysia
cost
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spend
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the most money on housing rather than others. As
it
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apply
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can be seen, both countries' citizens
tent
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tend
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to spend approximately one-fourth of their budget on food in the year 2010. Health care occupied the fewest part among all
catagories
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categories
in Japan and Malaysia
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year, 6% and 3% respectively. In terms of transport,
Malaysian
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Malaysians
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spent 10% of total expenditures, and
Japanese
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the Japanese
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cost twice on transportation. Housing
make
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makes
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up the largest proportion of families' budget in Malaysia, roughly one-third;
moreover
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, it
account
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accounts
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for almost one-fifth in Japan.
Cost
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The cost
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of other goods and services
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occupied a considerable part in both nations.

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