The bar chart illustrates the percentage of how parents in a country spent time taking care of their children in the evening in 2022. (rewriteja)

The bar chart illustrates the percentage of how parents in a country spent time taking care of their children in the evening in 2022. (rewriteja)
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The bar chart shows the amount of how
father
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fathers
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&
mother
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mothers
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in a national leisure time taking protect of their boys & girls in the evening in 2022.
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,it can be seen that the lowest percentage of fathers
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the highest percentage of mothers.

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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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