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The graph below shows changes in the percentage of households with cars in one European country between 1971 and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows changes in the percentage of households with cars in one European country between 1971 and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The data presents key information about the shifts in the
rate
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 of
families
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 with cars in
one
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 European state .
Overall
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, the number of
families
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 with no
car
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 declined steadily throughout the period .
In addition
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, homes with
one
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car
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has
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have
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 a fluctuating rise in 30 years .
Whereas
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, households with two cars have a remaining constant .
According to
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 what is shown , In 1971
families
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 with no
car
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 had a high
rate
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 in the chart with more than %40 . In 1981 the amount of households with no
car
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droped
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dropped
 to almost %40 .
While
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 the number of
one
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car
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 and two cars
families
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growthed
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growth
 a little . In terms of , In 1991 the number of residents with
one
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car
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 increased and it became the highest
rate
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 in the chart . In 2001 the percentage of
families
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 with
one
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car
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 in
one
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 eurozone member had a downward
rate
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 . Despite of, The
one
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-
car
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car
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 households are higher than the others .

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words rate, families, one, car with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • households
  • cars
  • graph
  • increase
  • decrease
  • trend
  • comparison
  • Eurozone
  • ownership
  • data
  • economic growth
  • policy changes
  • urbanization
  • milestones
  • clarity
  • significance
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