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The graph below shows changes in the percentage of households with cars in one European country between 1971 and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows changes in the percentage of households with cars in one European country between 1971 and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart provides key information on the
percentage
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 of
households
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 with
cars
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 in a European country between 1971 and 2001. The units are measured in percentages.
Overall
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, it is clear from the graph that in 1971, the
percentage
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 of
households
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 with no
car
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 was significantly high.
In addition
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, the
proportion
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 of
households
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 with
one
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car
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 was lower than those with no
car
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,
whereas
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 the
percentage
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 of
one
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-
car
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households
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 was twice as high as those with
two
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 or more
cars
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. In 1991, the
percentage
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 of
households
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 with
one
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car
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 increased sharply, reaching approximately 50%.
Moreover
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, the
proportion
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 of
households
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 without a
car
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 declined noticeably.
Furthermore
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, the
percentage
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 of
households
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 with
two
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cars
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 in 1991 exceeded that of
households
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 with
two
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cars
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 in 1971. By 2001, there was a 10% decline in the
proportion
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 of
households
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 with
one
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car
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.
Additionally
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, the percentages of
households
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 with
one
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 and
two
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cars
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 were almost identical. Meanwhile, the
proportion
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 of
households
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 without a
car
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 remained unchanged between 1991 and 2001.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, households, cars, car, proportion, one, two with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 7 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • households
  • cars
  • graph
  • increase
  • decrease
  • trend
  • comparison
  • Eurozone
  • ownership
  • data
  • economic growth
  • policy changes
  • urbanization
  • milestones
  • clarity
  • significance
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